Please(?)I wish I would get more hits on my gallery.
Rather, more comments on my work.
Not to seem narcissistic.
But it'd be nice.
Oh, such is deviantART poetry.
The Air was FilledThe air was filled with atomic pearls, The terrain – laid out with the same. They glistened – those flakes in the atmosphere, And God was all to blame.The Air was Filled
Angelic contour designed those beds, But the angels all up and left. Their robes and wings destroyed our scene, But they had left their breath.
It’s that which softens all our hopes, That which stresses eyes, That which sculpts great memories, Of whiter, better times.
Another year for us to wait, For another pearly glow. The Angels will come to rest again, Then we’ll wait for them to
Up in Arms"I want you in my arms" she said, As she rocked in those cumulous cradles. ‘Oh, dear won't you come back in to bed?’ She tiptoed along webs of cables. "Oh, pace beside me, darling" she spoke. I stepped out and we plummeted down. Now I in her arms, from the grass she awoke. For my heart broke our fall to the ground.Up in Arms
Checker BoredIt's a horizontal rebellion! Complimentary values, stacked atop each other forming countless bands of dreams in repetition! These outrageous flares of pure and original, protesting and proud canes of holy nylon comply to my cravings for a fresher dew, a greener grass, and crisper oxygen! While believed in every other cord, above and beneath each ethereal cuff of my dear God's blankest stare; restless, misbehaved, and connection impaired spirit's hands thrive for fellow Ethiop, palms to fist, they fathomlessly thrust for their thirst, who, in their two dimensional, black pearl planes, cry out and above to a losChecker Bored
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Never apologize for your art.
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Never apologize for your art.
*nods*
w3rd.
ohmanihopethispostswhereiwantittohah.
ANYWAY. Write more!
Bye
-Rin
comment on stuff okay thanks!
w3rd!
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-babyluv
"happy endings suck..."
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Tandem impetravi ut egomet me corrumperem
at last! i've finally managed to completely screw up my life!
my arts here: [link]
And thank you very much! Comments are scarce on my work, so they are greatly appreciated!
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